S - your chosen practitioners are very good and the information you wrote about them is very good. I - In your conclusion you mentioned that you're going to use a little bit of both practitioners in your magazine, if this is the case then you need to give specifics as to what exactly you're going to borrow from these styles to make your magazine effective. T - Give specific examples that link to how you're going apply these techniques from your chosen practitioners, and please add this in RED FONT.
S - your chosen practitioners are very good and the information you wrote about them is very good.
ReplyDeleteI - In your conclusion you mentioned that you're going to use a little bit of both practitioners in your magazine, if this is the case then you need to give specifics as to what exactly you're going to borrow from these styles to make your magazine effective.
T - Give specific examples that link to how you're going apply these techniques from your chosen practitioners, and please add this in RED FONT.